woo hoo. S Four lyrics.

homework from billy requires MASSIVE amount of inspiration and brainpower. he said "你应该读多一点书。" hahah i thought that was pretty funny. haha but i guess i was most amused when he mentioned this about my lyrics - "这是现在小孩子会说的话". yay i am a 小孩子! :)

learning points:
- use more verbs to present actions
- lay your path in the song properly. must 铺程
- use more prepositions to intensify emotions / change the course of the story.

hahaa it's like primary school composition! woohoo.